revisions

I can be all over when revising. I like to print out the paper after sitting down and writing it for the first time, then later go back to the paper, read it then fully revise it. I go back and try to write in extra parts, add quotes, or take out things that aren't necessary. It is pretty tedious but every time i do it, i catch more and more mistakes that i have since learned from. A metephor for my revision style would be like tasting as you are cooking, making the meal, then deciding as it is cooking what to add to give it more flavor or cancel out other tastes.